[Uh huh, sure, and he'll just be putting the finishing touches on this plate before carrying it over to (????) wherever the maids or butlers will be picking it up for their patrons.]

You overestimate people's capacity to absorb large amounts of information at once. In bite-sized pieces, volume is less of an issue.

[He shrugs, wanders back to his station, and begins tidying it while he waits for the next order.]

I'm not saying that people won't read, listen, or watch what you're producing if it isn't a specific length, but you'd certainly broaden your appeal with something shorter.